All Comments on 'Taking My Sister Ch. 01'

Very hot and fascinating.

great story cant wait for part two keep writing

Great story hope there is a next chapter

awesome story keep it up can't wait for part two

nice style of writing...very detailed..making it fun to read. keep writing more..doesnt have to be a continuation of this story.

Wow! Great story, well written and quite well thought out. Very believable, only a few errors that didn't really take away from the story. Keep it up!

Nice style, and what makes it the most thrilling is how much it resembles reality, I mean, writing is not about being realistic but about being creative and also make things plausible. Felicidades.

Your story was great! I have read alot of stories on here in the past two years; came across this one today and loved it. What's up with taking so long to do Chapter 2? When you do #2, please don't put mom and dad in it. You can add anyone else in except them. It would really be nice if you keep it just the two of them. Please don't get her pregnant that's just a big disappointment. How freaky can they get? More, soon; please!

since it is my first amendment right to comment on this story and not have it erased here are my thoughts-ever heard of rape asshole they make a catagory just for assholes like you and you can tell what kind of readers are on this site when they think a rape story is good put your stories in the proper catagory

The story was okay. I think you could have fleshed out some of the emotions a little more. But that is just me. To the comment below. Yes you have a right to your opinion--We have the right to ignor you,

use your pea brain for once there are readers here that have been raped and do not want to be reminded of the hell they went through that is why they have a nonconsent area USE THE PROPER CATAGORY you can and should be sued for failing to use the proper catagory and for causing undue trauma to said readers stop sitting on your brain and think for a change

...what did you expect from a story called "Taking My Sister"? I would think the title alone was enough to warn you about the content....then again, maybe I'm giving you too much credit.

Use your brains next time.

LOVED IT. Really hot.

Actually, it's both. I'm glad it was in this category.

If you didn't like the direction of the story, you could have stopped reading.

Loved the story. Thanks!

this it so the very first comment.... dude.... we're in the incest/taboo category.. what did u think this was going to be? " taking my sister " OF COURSE ITS ABOUT SEX BETWEEN A BROTHER AND SISTER... not taking the sister out dacing and a dinner and coming home and going to bed... really it was an AMAZING story i couldnt get enough so far.... your an amazing writer!!!

I read this story a few years ago and it's still good. I forgot the name after a while but I found it again. For the record, if this was in the "nonconsent/reluctance" category, a lot of people would bitch about it being incest. So basically, fuck em. Love your stories. Keep writing.

i wish the stupid webmasters would demand that all stories be restricted to one catagory i.e. if you want to write an incest story keep it loving and consensual if you want to put force or rape in your story keep the incest out and put it in the proper catagory.

if we wanted to read about forced sex we would go to the nonconsent area not here

Really great story. I loved it. You rock. Don't listen to judgmental idiots.

i jerked twice to this

When it's consensual, it's hot and erotic, this is not, it's the worst kind of trash. A nasty, forgettable story

Ben is just an ass and maybe if you'd taken the story to him being the "understanding" brother and somehow wooing her/winning her over, then this would have been superb. It's just too much of a contradiction to swallow that she hates it yet wants him to violate her. That's not something any woman wants in that state of mind. So this is just too unbelievable to accept and it's just forcing himself on her, which is really disgusting.

well. difficult subject but nicely written. i wont say i like the sub but its a good story.

We had two guys in my school who raped their kid sisters; one of them accidently got a lead pipe wrapped around his head and now he draws with crayons and giggles constantly while he shits himself, and the other one somehow managed to get himself tied face down in his cell while three big black gays fucked the shit out of him; now he's HIV-positive, so who says rapists don't get their just desserts...

I can 't myself I grew 14 inches 5, my lady loved it, I kept shooting cum 6 times and she wanted more.

The brother is an arogant prick.Fine ,he may have had an attraction to his sister,but to rape her against her will,he is a sick bastard.He is the type of guy that after a while he don't get his way with a woman,whether it is a girlfriend,wife whatever,he will probably beat the shit out of her or worse,killing her! Sex is something that should not be forced upon someone in order for the others enjoyment.Did not like this story at all,it is not erotic by no means.

For some of the best orgasms I've had in a while. Truly well written, I look forward to reading more of your work.

dude your story man!!!so fucking good..i cant describe how much i liked it..incest and non consent with blackmail thats the best category if it existed..and you have no idea how much i loved reading it the first time and how much time it took me to find it for the second but the time was worth it..again amazing work..you shouldnt have stopped..and cheers!!

I can't even finish this detestable piece of shit.

This entire story is about a guy coercing his sister into having sex with him. Eventually, he rapes her. At that point, I stopped reading the rest.

Rape

If your going to write a story about RAPE, put it in the NONCON section, that's what it's their for

Fucked my sisters for years! Started fucking them when they were about 12 and did so for the next 10 years.

They loved it!!

Shot lots of cum into there pussies.

He takes what he wants.. ugh so hot. Please write more of this exact same thing. You’re a god ❤️

Fabulous... Best left unspoken🤯

Good premise.

But most sex is much too automatic. Too perfunctory.

Needs more in the way of foreplay. Needs boob action/playing. Why wouldn't he have put his cock betweern her breasts at some point toward the beginning of their sexual interaction, titty fuck her, and cum on her face?

Four stars.

Should of made sure she had your kid in her.i fucked my sister got her knocked we moved in together have three kids live in different town are parents don't even want talk us then one day are other sister came to visit came out said to us that she wanted me to knock her up I said only one problem we do threesome and you live with us us three sleep in same bed my sisters agree still living sleeping together sale bed

Yeah, I liked that he corrupted his sister and basically stole her from the black guy. But I didn't enjoy the rape aspects of the story at all. Corruption via seduction is erotic. Rape is a huge turn off. 😳 I should have given you a much lower grade, but I'm in a benevolent mood. 4/5

I thought it was an excellent story