All Comments on 'Taking the High Road'

I like your evolution as a writer. You have a style that I find very appealing. It is for those who love to read a real story, and not just a quickie. I hope you'll keep developing your style into something bigger and better. Your stories have a special flavor. While there maybe some that will criticize it, but there are those of us, who enjoy and appreciate your hard work. Keep going. Keep up the good work.

Cindy's feigned reluctance went on way too long, especially in the absence of much dialogue.

Story went on and on with very little payoff. I feel like I wasted my time trying to see if there would be a satisfying end. I just felt frustrated once done. A lot of unnecessary stops and starts. Most scenes were anticlimactic.

I agree that the story dragged on for nothing. Cindy kept holding back in a hippo-critical way. She is there, she’s not there, all for no sensible reasons. I think the author just wanted to drag things on and on for reasons that probably made sense only to him.