All Comments on 'Taking the Orc Chieftains Virginity'

This is great! Definitely needs a follow up because I need to know what happens next.

I listened to this as kind of a joke but by the end I felt like I discovered something amazing. So much world building!

I am always a huge fan of Fantasy (genre) erotica. More and more the stories of love and sex across the uncommon races has had a more potent effect. What I loved most was “the spark,” a magical connection that bypasses the natural physical resiliences, and a sense of how cultural it is. I also thought the breaking of the hymen was brilliant, in causing her to bleed and what that meant.

I also liked feeling like I was the human you were talking to. You could have increased the intensity of the humiliation based on the characters, but I am glad you didn’t take that too far. Personally more turned on with her in physical control, than verbal abuse.

I would love more of this story, but I could see if you stopped it here. Not that sex between these two wouldn’t be intense, but it’s the first time lust and discovery that occurs that makes this intense.

Hope your considering part two.... perhaps post battle or battle avoided somehow? Would love to see/read/hear how these two can progress. Perhaps chieftain with a swollen belly with a hybrid baby?

Loved the story. Correct me if I'm wrong but did I hear the names Gork and Mork in there?

What the hell, are you trying to give me an orc fetish or something? lol

......more please.

That was amazing. I didn't come here looking for that, but I had been listening to such asmr stories on YouTube with safe for work stories like that. Yours was just as good & not safe for work. Woo, hoo! Was thinking I would try my hand at writing such a story if I ever had time. Now I don't have too. Keep having fun with your creativity. Thank you for sharing.

Your narration is spot on with the flow of the story, enjoy listening to all your posts