All Comments on 'Taking the Risk Ch. 04'

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tompo296tompo296over 1 year ago

Excellent, enjoying this story

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
bloody good

i do like this story/ experience

keep writing

cheers

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
Nicely done

Thoroughly enjoyable. Looking forward to more. I like the way you have resisted the temptation to make this too easy or too pat. More interesting this way.

marklionmarklionalmost 15 years ago
Another Great Chapter!!!!

You have written in another great chapter in the series. I like how you described the dinner with Misha and Francesca with her son Jace. I also like the way the romance between the two of them is developing and how Misha has fallen in with Francesca. I can hardly wait for the next chapter.

visualwillvisualwillalmost 15 years ago
excellent story

Nicely written. It sounds like real life and develops slowly. I can't wait until the next chapter. I hope they come frequently.

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