All Comments on 'Taking The Sugar Glider In A Park'

I don't know how you managed to write so many words about sex and make it so boring. Ok, first off the rape drug plotline could def. be handled better, for instance if this guy is so hot on making anthros 'pay' why is he giving them a drug that makes it better for them... and knocking them up? It seems like you really want to write a hot sexy scene where people start out not liking it, and then move towards liking it - examples could be a chemical spill at a factory, or trapped in a lift. Finally get somebody to check over the grammar because you need help.

I disagree with the other comment, I thought it was rude and unnecessary and I hope you don’t take it to heart, I really liked your story.