All Comments on 'Taking Them with Me'

That was dark

Junior college only has 2 years. There are no juniors.

Looks like she found her life's work.

Great story

Really been enjoying your stories! Thanks for taking the time to write them!

Need a good once over edit for typos. Loved the story.

A satisfying degradation story that escalates disturbingly quickly. The way she comes to her senses somewhat when she's finally allowed to come is what really sells it for me. Thanks for your writing!

The main characters changes make her somewhat three dimensional. Plus the degradation is solidly hot. Telling this story from this perspective is both a smart shortcut and believable.

Absolutely fabulous, 5 stars! But...I think the appeal comes from Alice's alert mind rationalizing the depravity as a way to get the reward. Having 'blank mind' Alice do depraved things just isn't as compelling. Still loved it!

incredibly hot. Love that her dignity was lost one piece at a time, not all at once. Little details like this really do it for me: after her degrading photo shoot and putting the files where he and others can see, the next day she had 15 facebook friend requests, most friends of friends of Johnny, but some not. like her pics were attracting attenion from random males.