All Comments on 'Taking Up when Gramps Left Off Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Super start, looking forward to Ch 2

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

I had a similar holiday on the Broads but not with Mum and Gran......

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Interesting story, weigh anchor and let's get going....

WhitewaterbumWhitewaterbumover 1 year ago

Very good start. Glad you are having Jack a wine merchant again. For your American readers., you need a little geography info as to where the Norfolk Broads are in England. Is the river running west to east or north to south. Does the the river go all the way to the ocean or into a larger river like the Thames? Waiting on next chapter.

Lone_HawkLone_Hawkover 1 year ago

Story idea, very good.

Execution, very choppy and short on detail.

I'm sorry, I can only give it a 3 star rating.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Great start! If only Mum and Gran could still get pregnant...!

bigsoftiebigsoftieover 1 year ago

I enjoyed it. I want to read more

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

was brilliant very erotic

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

These slots never get pregnant in your stories.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Extremely erotic, more please!!!!

dirtysondirtysonover 1 year ago

Yeah as mentioned before have them impregnated ,Give them some skimpy bikinis that barely cover those big milkers!

dirtysondirtysonover 1 year ago

Yeah as mentioned before have them impregnated ,Give them some skimpy bikinis that barely cover those big milkers!

kingswedekingswedeover 1 year ago
Great

Great beginning to another one of you fabulous stories.

Some say to get them PG, but I bet they are to old for that, so just fuck the mall day long and enjoy the beautiful ladies bodies.

I bet they both would love to titty fuck that huge cock of yours and catch the cum in theirs mouth as it explodes.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Awesum story heaps of action with Mom , Gran and Jack.. He sure was a ,lucky guy having his Mom and Gran to enjoy.

See that the writer intends to continue this story maybe the Moms daughter or the mum's sister will appear on the next chapter..I could certainly be the Moms sister and to enjoy Jack's cock plus Moms n Grans sweet juicy pussys..Do send a note to Jacqui willjreedy at outlook dot com

FeltfixerFeltfixer10 months ago

The first coupling was too quick.

There should have been a bit seduction considering it was a mother and son.

She must have had reservations about it.

If not, why hadn’t she done it before the trip.

FeltfixerFeltfixer10 months ago

Sorry

5stars though

AnonymousAnonymous5 months ago

5 stars, just love older people.

but then again i like to hear about silk under ware,

i bet gramps liked some ass play tooooo.

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