All Comments on 'Talent Scout'

by northof45

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
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Well done northof45. Bravo. You developed both characters personalities and actions as skillfully as you paced the story. Though categorized as exhib/voy I enjoyed the loving wife/nonc-reluc aspects as well. Looking forward to the next installment(s). Also hoping to read about Rick's additional exploits when Ms. Kaitlyn's experiences end. Potential series I selfishly inquire?

Assuming your pen name pertains to age but also describes your writing success.

Definitely an upward direction.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Very good setup for a sequel. I really wanted to make that trip to the boat with her and see how things transpire there.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Always wondered why there was no sequel when author stated there would be. Too bad as northof45 is a good writer and this storyline had potential.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

This story SCREAMED for a sequel. Seriously.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

great STORY, BUT i Have one im important question; Why did you make your female protagonist be q teacher? Is there any particular reason for that to be her professing, or will that question be answered ion future chapters? YOMEYO

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