All Comments on 'Tales from the Stream Ch. 17'

Cliché! Great banter between characters. You manage to create more with less, still maintain the reader’s interest in this story. Great story, I love the ease and transition in dialogue. Thanks for continuing with such a high level of quality writing

I do like Reg. I like all the others, too, but there's something endearing about our salad-making little robot. Just be sure that he has a safe haven whenever the rest of the crew decide to go all schoolgirl and play rough games. This may be just a small slice of life aboard but a fun one. Highly entertaining, Wax.

(I know of one reader who will be more than happy to read of Marmite and salad biscuits. Enjoy!)

Hahahahahahahaha! So does Emily get a toaster oven? Loved it!

If it weren't for cliches, we'd have no plot at all ...

So is it a cliche when you go from an emotionally tense chapter to a warm lighthearted one ending in a pillow fight? Hmmm? Doesn’t matter, I still enjoyed reading it.

That was a fun little snippet in the lives of our favorite lesbian space pirates. Its amusing that they have realized they are cliches. And can see the humor in that. Well written as always. Even with the constant conversations, each of them continues to come across as different from the others. A credit to your abilities. Maybe one day I will get to sample this Marmite they seem to love.

As always, thank you for sharing.

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At some point so many different cliches kinda defeats the stereotype. There's a whole lot of variety with our favorite lesbian space pirates, which makes their lives exceptionallly spicy and hot!!! Another nice little check in with the ladies Thanks Wax..

Mmmmmm breakfast in bed with the girls , oy one thing could of improved this fun tale and that is that I was invited along to sample Lucia and Jade's marmite covered feast under the covers. Maonaigh was right , I'm very happy. A great fun chapter and who doesn't like the odd lesbian cliché or two . The pillow fight was the perfect way to let off steam after the advertising trauma snd I'm always pleased to read more of Reg .Stonkingly good as ever Wax , thank you . Jc

This is such a fun story! Loving it

Thanks so much, everyone. I do enjoy reading the comments. It's fun to do a silly chapter every so often and I'm happy to see others enjoying it too. I'm sure the girls will enjoy their new toaster oven in the galley. (See FriskeyMind's comment.)