All Comments on 'Tales from the Stream Ch. 21'

This is my favorite zany story on Literotica at this time.

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Any words of praise I could give would be unworthy. How does one respond to that level of inspirational creativity and wordsmithing. I'm obviously failing. I guess I'll just have to leave it at that. ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

The moral of this story is never focc with a lesbian space pirates or a Nun . Brilliant Wax , this was a hoot esp like the ninja harvester crabs and Sister Jane showing novice nuns the correct way to bathe , it's a tough job but someone got to do it . Nice to get the whole gang in on the rescue mission and reacquaint myself with Val and Marie-Anne. I'm glad peace has been restored and Lucia can hang up her gloves . I think Cap'n Jade is getting her reward as I type but here is yours Wax 🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟 . Another stonking good romp round the stars , I'm very fond of this gang of butt kicking ladies so I was pleased to see them return. Im sure Mother Bertilda will have those money grabbing foccers in line soon, Mother Bertilda for Prime Minister, she has my vote. Thank you Wax . Jc

Thanks Waxy, that was a giggly treat! The Corporate ruler was a nice touch.

Brilliant, Wax! You made me laugh out loud within a few words---it was the image of the harvester crabs learning a dance routine. Not only was it your vivid writing but I imagined the crabs singing 'Tits and Ass' from the show/film A Chorus Line. There were one or two bits of dialogue that reminded me of some other films (eg "...it's not Lucia's way..." made me think of the Amish "...it's not our way..." in Witness). I don't know if this was intentional or chance. Whatever, another first-rate chapter with five more stars in the spaceways.

"ancient art of ---- Tae Bo", "Junior FOCCERs".....oh my, did I snort out loud. Maybe. I thought you were done last chapter, so glad to see I was wrong.

It’s probably best the Chapters aren’t too long, my cheeks hurt from grinning

Exciting chapter with a lot of action and tension in the boardroom ...... Dont mess with the force of the religious flying nuns ...... This is so outof space this story and you're writing about the berserkers, from the black prince or the hildegard von bingen, but no blood no broken nose or leg, just aidoru with toblerone "....... Magnificent enchanting

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Hilarious, exciting and loving, what a great chapter.! You sure you don’t have any military experience? With FOCCERS and the way you throw out acronyms you give the military a run for their money. Loved the 3rd degree belt Tae Bo Amaliya, crab salute and the SM references. This story really brightened my day. Is this a great story? Can I get a Oorah? OORAH!!!!

now that the ladies are back together. I enjoyed the marines just marching in, taking names and kicking arses. I'm surprised that Amalya wasn't teaching Lucia "wax on, wax off". I wonder if the board members of the FOCCERS now have to wear little catholic school children outfits for their meetings. The crab reconnaissance was a nice touch and a good way to get everyone involved in getting their sister back. I also liked their old friends lending them a hand. Well written as always.

Thank you for sharing. I do hope there will be more down the road for these ladies.

Another wonderful chapter. Glad to see that the girls are still going to be around. Laugh out loud fun! 5 stars.

For a minute there I thought you’d killed Aidoru. Whew! I didn’t want to have to take back every nice thing I’ve said about you ;). I wish there existed a dancing harvester crab dance troupe. I’d gladly pay dearly to see that! I love it when characters collide and to watch the nuns join in the fight to free Aidoru tickled me. Nuns have no patience for fools, bullies and kidnappers! I’m not quite sure how you move so easily between comedy, drama and tragedy, but happy I get to enjoy it!