by EstebanMamono
The ending was much sweeter than I anticipated, given the dark elven nature from your previous stories. All's well that ends well.
And the most detailed depiction of the sex magic ritual was a sight to behold. Nice, there are lot of things to learn from it.
The only possible complaint is that Celedwin didn't stop by her dark elven friend, Kerala, after the departure from the tower. I know you did explain why, but still... it would've made a nice finishing touch, IMHO.
Fantastic ending! My only sorrow, was thinking that Caledwin would end up staying there, and would be rich from what she had given them, and would continue to work in Mage tower.