All Comments on 'Tales of Dirty Old Man Ch. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
Well, Wow, Amazing - More More More

I started to read the first chapter of this sitting in the car one morning stuck in a traffic jam, by the time i had finished reading it, i was feeling amazing.. Chapter 2, was just as amazing as the first, all i can ask is that you write more on this story.. and Second, Any idea's where i can find a "Simone"?

Romantic1Romantic1about 10 years ago
More great stuff!! Five stars!!

Keep it up. Great story. How come I never met a Simone? Sigh!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
Please continue, great 5 star story

Thank you for continuing the story....Look forward top reading and enjoying future parts

AndyhmAndyhmabout 10 years agoAuthor

Thank you for the comments

Chapters 3 and 4 are coming

AndyhmAndyhmalmost 10 years agoAuthor
Updated chapter

I've updated this chapter based on your feed back. I hope you enjoy this version

maddictmaddictover 8 years ago
You thought the boat was rocking?

Aye, its a salty Captain who knows his boat. I'm older than all of you, thanks for not fucking till sunrise, yea I have to recharge more than ever now. Cruising a river in France, from England think i'll do some more dreaming.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
Please fix it.

This is the wrong story line.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
This chapter is out of place

I think this chapter belongs to different story

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
Mistake

Please put the original story back. :(

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