by fjim87
Well done for a first effort. One thing... please either get an editor or learn the difference between "your" and "you are" (abbrev to "you're") The quality of your writing gets diminished by childish spelling/grammar errors. Cheers.
You lost me at "Its not a mammoth cock but it does measure out at eight and a half inches and 4 inches around." Yeah, sure. One star from me.
Good story, I hope to read more from you in the future. As others have said, the little things matter.
Great story. Enjoyed reading it, I hope it contines with additional chapters.
Really liked it, and my wife and I would have great sex from day one, but a few weeks into our relationship I started to tell her how much I liked eating her hairy cunt and it perked her up so that now we both talk dirty to each other and she tells me to cum and shoot my jizm into her mouth or cunt.
I'm a redheaded white wife, 5'9", long wraparound firm legs and ass, 38DD (yes they are real), when erect my nipples get really firm and are about one inch, I'm extremely orally inclined and rather submissive, enjoy anal sex and hard deep fucking. Enjoy a man eating my pussy and I am a squirter, I am open to most things sexual and willing to try new things. I am not into pain or the marking of my body,
Orpheum69
good start for a lot of action with a hot little cunt; keep her going, diving into the world f hot sex.
"38DD (yes they are real)" comment cracked me the fuck up. Like that's a good thing? Newsflash: 38 band size means you are at LEAST 40 pounds overwight, and a shit ton of extra body fat around your entire torso, not just a pair of fat, saggy tits. In other words, gross, heifer-like typical overweight modern woman. Blech.