by braindump
I cannot believe that twist ending!! Wow I fell in love with Alice too she was quite the tart but how on earth did she know he was going to come on to her? She didn't even make the first move it was all him taking the phone and even going to her house. I wonder what Alice and James will be up to next, James should have taken a naked selfie of them getting nasty to prove to his brother that he won the bet too. Great story!
That wasn't a bad story but the ending came from the blue. I think there could have been a little more thought to how you got there. It was ok tho.
Got me on that one it seemed to obvious where it was going to end!
To fast to be believable. And when he told her husband what had happened and he divorced her, that's when he got the last laugh. Poorly thought out story and badly delivered.
That she was just a bet. That way he could have his dig at her. I just feel sorry for her husband.