All Comments on 'Tali Ch. 04'

within and between these people are so intense. As much as we want to know more about their histories and the world in which they live, it is probably much stronger this way. Without all of that clutter, we are left with the purity of their emotional/mental struggles. This story should make us all think about how we are all a product of life conditioning. Not all conditioning is conducive to robust functioning in the greater world. Thank you for continueing the story.

I am looking forward to seeing this story continue. It's a classic! So cleverly thought out.