All Comments on 'Tamara In Stockings Ch. 12'

Dr beulahthebrit; Excellent series of stories, that followed Tamara as she opened up and expanded her sexual freedom and I think you have finished at the right time, but another series with her now in her late sixties/ early seventies would be welcome.

Loved this whole series. Can’t wait to see what u do next. Awesome job

Loved all of the stories.

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Congratulations on writing all these chapters. I share your love of stockings and suspender bumps, so this was right in target for me.

You had put your stories through a spell checker which is great; however plenty of homonyms crept through (eg ‘their’ / ‘there’) with a few other small grammar errors. You might want to search them out, or find an editor to do it.

I’m pleased you finished with rounding out the story with the same character you started with. Good stories need this before/after structure. The middle chapters were a little episodic. That’s somewhat inevitable on a website like this, but if you were to publish it elsewhere, you might want to consider wider character arcs - and a less dizzying array of characters too!

I realise it’s a fantasy, and there’s nothing wrong with that. However, I felt that sometimes you stretched the fantasy too far, which broke my suspension of reality. Sometimes less is more.

Overall, a super effort and exhilarating read which I enjoyed. Thank you.

Like fantasizing about sharing a bicycle with dozens of people. Really it's exactly like that, only the dozens of people are all tour de France bicyclists. And you're grateful that they hand it back to you at the end of the day, or at least when they're done with it. It may be battered and filthy, but it's yours, and you love the knowledge that all those people used it before you.