by nickisilvers
Story has possibilities, need to continue it. Not like some of the writers here very few errors over all good just left wanting more.
Nicki is progressing nicely as a good story teller. I like her writing and she is becoming a great author. MORE please!
Nicely written, very descriptive. Your words painted some very erotic pictures. Please, disobey again.
Cette jeune fille doit absolument approfondir sa connaissance d'elle-même ... :)
It was great but it's only a start. I'm a guy but I don't like to read about men beating up women. Please write more.
one of the best father daughter spanking stories on this site. This "daddy" loved it.
Cant wait to read more
Loved the story. Like that it's a slow build. That you didn't have him do anything else to her yet.