All Comments on 'Tamed Pt. 03: The Beginning'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

great

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Well done, outside of the repeated obvious mistakes ("...she felt my hand gripped in my hair...").

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I usually write Harem stories with hung dudes and thicc women. I am always looking to improve my writing skills, so I am always welcome receiving feedback emails or comments :)

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