All Comments on 'Taming an Immortal Ch. 14'

I really shed tears thinking she died. Great story!

i love this story very much and i will be waiting for more

You make me cry!, thank you for story!.

Thank you!

This was such an amazing story! The love between Rose and Eitene and Rose was so pure and amazing! The only thing I'd may recommend is maybe making a very small short story and Eitene and Rose's past together since we barely got any Info on that. My other suggestion is maybe get this published! It's truly a good enough story to be published or you can expand on it and make it bigger. Either way I'm so happy I came across this story with amazing new ideas like angelic like vampires and their unique cultures. Absolutely amazing!

. . . . . Thanks!

Looking forward to the next one,,

That was perfect. Thank you. Looking forward to the sequel (s).

I am so happy with you right now I don't know what to do. This chapter had everything it needed, it had me on edge. But most importantly you finished the story. I can't count how many times I have started a new story; only to have the author not finish it. I am so loving you right now. I can't wait for your next installment. Great job.

...for another amazing chapter!! I'm so happy to hear you are writing more along this line. Your talent is most appreciated.

Thank you so much for a great story, so happy to hear you're going to do a sequel can't wait for it!

u are wonderful writer

And i think u know iT already

But in chapter 6 u put "camera"

And i think maybe u forgot that this story is from another time when horses were used and i dont think that they could have any camera?

But this is the most amazing story

if i could give u more then 5 stars, then i would

Really this story is breath taking beautiful

And when are u going to put the squeal For this story

Hurry up!

I loved this story, mainly because it reminded me so much of the anime I grew up watching and fell in love with. Inuyasha. You made my pre-teen dreams come true with this story. So thank you so much

AN AMAZING STORY POSSIBLE THE BEST I HAVE EVER READ ON LITEROTICA.

This is an amazing story you took my favorite characters from Inyuasha, and told the story I always wanted to see more of in the anime series. Even though the world is differnt to the anime thank you for giving them a story.

I'm sorry but I still can't stomach Etienne and his arrogance. Rose said it herself. If he had truly wanted her he would never have pushed her away to begin with. As sad as I was for Rose and everyone else who loved her I thought it served him right for her to die leaving him eternity to regret being an arrogant selfish little bitch! As much as I enjoyed ArtForm's other stories this one didn't do it for me. There were so many other characters that weren't given any resolution. Just storylines that never went anywhere.

I have really enjoyed this series. Even through the ups and downs, your pulled it all together. You are a fantastic writer. Please keep writing.

I couldn’t put this down! I’m so glad they ended up together. Real life is so full of heartbreak and unhappy endings, I love the reprieve of reading true love smut 🙂