All Comments on 'Taming the Boss Pt. 05'

anal/strap on F2M sex without it being derogatory to the man, So she tells him

""Beg for it baby. Beg for my dick" he says "Please mistress! Please fuck me with your dick!". But oh no that's not emasculating is it.

I like taking anal sex occasionally with my wife, but you don't need the abusive verbal stuff to enjoy the physical stimulation.

I think this worked as an ending for the story. I don't have a problem with the way "Johnny" was portrayed here since that was the obvious goal all along. (as I've said earlier; It would have had more power if Johnny had resisted a little more before capitulating ;) As I've tried to get across in all my comments; You have stories to tell and I know there is an audience for those stories. This story had a good premise. I urge you to read up on what elements a fictional story should have — and keep writing. Try to make each story better than the last. Best wishes for an enjoyable hobby - yukonnights

Thanks so much for all your comments, yukonknights. These have been very helpful. I am just starting with this hobby and would look into more about fictional writing. I hope it gets better with time!

This is a great story. The only thing that can make it better is a chapter where Amanda proposes to John, and the two of them later get married. Bonus points if the vows include John honoring and obeying Amanda.

Thank you for some great stories. I read them pretty much in a short time, so only went back and voted on your first four, and writing my comments here. I know English is not your first language so some of the phrasing and spelling were slightly off, but didn't really detract from the story.

I'm sure you can think up better plots and scenes then i can. But the comment about making him ask/beg to be pegged is not emasculating, it shows how much he adores and worships her and so therefore wants her to do whatever she will enjoy to him!

And i absolutely would love to see more stories from you following their adventures together. And i think she can have him do more humiliating things because he would not consider them 'humiliating' if done by her! We still have not had rimming or peeing, etc. (just an aside, i think urine is fine, but scatological pursuits are not only dangerous, but gross, my opinion).

And i do not know that they have to get into heavy BDSM, she seems to be more into tease, denial, and humiliation, maybe not exactly humiliation but making sure he knows who is the 'real' BOSS.

Again PLEASE continue your stories!

PS: Your profile show no gender, I have to admit to being very curious if you are male or female!

Thank you for some great stories. I read them pretty much in a short time, so only went back and voted on your first four, and writing my comments here. I know English is not your first language so some of the phrasing and spelling were slightly off, but didn't really detract from the story.

I'm sure you can think up better plots and scenes then i can. But the comment about making him ask/beg to be pegged is not emasculating, it shows how much he adores and worships her and so therefore wants her to do whatever she will enjoy to him!

And i absolutely would love to see more stories from you following their adventures together. And i think she can have him do more humiliating things because he would not consider them 'humiliating' if done by her! We still have not had rimming or peeing, etc. (just an aside, i think urine is fine, but scatological pursuits are not only dangerous, but gross, my opinion).

And i do not know that they have to get into heavy BDSM, she seems to be more into tease, denial, and humiliation, maybe not exactly humiliation but making sure he knows who is the 'real' BOSS.

Again PLEASE continue your stories!

PS: Your profile show no gender, I have to admit to being very curious if you are male or female!

Thank you for some great stories. I read them pretty much in a short time, so only went back and voted on your first four, and writing my comments here. I know English is not your first language so some of the phrasing and spelling were slightly off, but didn't really detract from the story.

I'm sure you can think up better plots and scenes then i can. But the comment about making him ask/beg to be pegged is not emasculating, it shows how much he adores and worships her and so therefore wants her to do whatever she will enjoy to him!

And i absolutely would love to see more stories from you following their adventures together. And i think she can have him do more humiliating things because he would not consider them 'humiliating' if done by her! We still have not had rimming or peeing, etc. (just an aside, i think urine is fine, but scatological pursuits are not only dangerous, but gross, my opinion).

And i do not know that they have to get into heavy BDSM, she seems to be more into tease, denial, and humiliation, maybe not exactly humiliation but making sure he knows who is the 'real' BOSS.

Again PLEASE continue your stories!

PS: Your profile show no gender, I have to admit to being very curious if you are male or female!

Thank you for some great stories. I read them pretty much in a short time, so only went back and voted on your first four, and writing my comments here. I know English is not your first language so some of the phrasing and spelling were slightly off, but didn't really detract from the story.

I'm sure you can think up better plots and scenes then i can. But the comment about making him ask/beg to be pegged is not emasculating, it shows how much he adores and worships her and so therefore wants her to do whatever she will enjoy to him!

And i absolutely would love to see more stories from you following their adventures together. And i think she can have him do more humiliating things because he would not consider them 'humiliating' if done by her! We still have not had rimming or peeing, etc. (just an aside, i think urine is fine, but scatological pursuits are not only dangerous, but gross, my opinion).

And i do not know that they have to get into heavy BDSM, she seems to be more into tease, denial, and humiliation, maybe not exactly humiliation but making sure he knows who is the 'real' BOSS.

Again PLEASE continue your stories!

PS: Your profile show no gender, I have to admit to being very curious if you are male or female!

Love all your stories maybe another addition but with chastity?

I loved this! Read all five in one sitting. I love erotic romance. The english was fab, considering this was your second language. A few bits were off but nothing that made me cringe or want to stop reading.

I loved the plot and I was left wanting more! Thanks for writing

Sasha :)

It was awesome. But for me , it still lacked some romance , but it's ok , I still lacked and since there's not any setting to rate it 4.7 or 8 , I would rate it 5 . Hope we get more from you as you are inactive for 3 yrs , I guess