All Comments on 'Tammy'

Beautiful love story.

A story by someone with the writing skills of a fourth grader. If you insist upon doing this, sign up for some classes, or at least get a competent editor.

You need to have someone edit this for you. The punctuation, along with formatting (paragraphs) is lacking. Will be worth a read once it is fixed.

Nice story, could have been a 4, but rated at 3. Get an editor! Curios/Curious, Falles/Phallus, Val Victorian/ Valedictorian, and too many more to list. Not to mention, “quotation marks”.

Could've been great if the grammer and formatting wasn't such a mess

My friend, as much as I like the *idea* of this story, the execution is undercut because nobody has taught you the meaning of the paragraph break or the dialog tag.