All Comments on 'Tangerine Orange Dress Pt. 02'

This second little episode continues nicely the setup introduced in the first part. Very readable and well written.

The texting to and fro was fun, although improbable that she could keep the lad standing by the door of the Beemer all that time while she texted. But I'm happy to suspend disbelief for a good story.

What I liked a lot was the crazy illogicality of a man, while having real penetrative sex with a woman, being turned on by her talking about another man simply ogling her. Crazy, illogical, but fun.

I liked it.

Lue

Ps: MrB, it's a pity that you didn't post this in Loving Wives. It would have been fascinating to see how the LW commentariat coped with this story. Will she or will she not keep the tangerine dress on? And how far will she go with it off?