All Comments on 'Tara's Party Exploration'

I really don't understand why you would submit something so short.

I agree with the other comment. Hot, but you zoomed through everything and I could hardly appreciate it. Draw it out moee, savor it

But I have to agree with the other comments, slow down, let us (and the characters) savor the experience.

Still gave 5 stars, even with a couple typos. Hopefully they get together again in the next story, and they aren't at a party where they have to rush things ;->