All Comments on 'Tart & Vicar Party'

by BigBrad

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AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
Just wanted more :)

I loved the premise, but I'm greedy. More! More! More yummy detail from that sex scene ;)

sacksackover 19 years ago
a tease...

This was like beginning a dinner with a delicious salad and then skipping to dessert. Could have been much more erotic if "fleshed" (poor choice of word!!) out more, with more detailed sex scenes. Try again with a story three times as long!

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