All Comments on 'Taste of Temptation Ch. 02'
by Smuttyandfun
- 10 Comments
kinkygeezerabout 5 years agoThank you for continuing this story, like the characters and the writing looking forward to the next chapter.
Anonymousabout 5 years agoThis is just a word for word Copy of Part one . Whats happened . SO DISAPPOINTED> Part one was great !
stattionabout 5 years agoReally enjoyed the story but it was very rushed. Everything moved along too quickly... felt like you crammed two chapters worth of story line into one chapter.
Anonymous12 months agoWow that mother in law is a real piece of work she screwed up her daughters life now has her claws in his and grand daughter a very screwed up law grandparents rights that law they found loop hole in order for her to mess with their lives b***h
Biologo24 days agoWhen you wrote, “Max quickly took hold of her wrist and checked over her thumb. Then without even thinking he drew it into his mouth and sucked on it to try and relieve the pain,” you revealed that you have never yourself burnt a finger or thumb because the added heat from popping it into your mouth would only have made it instantly feel worse. Especially if the burn were bad enough to break the skin—why else would it make sense to apply antiseptic to the area? Although the bacteria from someone else’s mouth is the last thing I would want to introduce into an open sore, in which case the antiseptic application would be a bit like closing the barn door AFTER the horse escaped.
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