by Kristuffer
There are thousand of names you can give to your characters. Why would you use "Clara" and "Chloe"? The names are way too similar. The stories on this site are for a quick read. Don't make your reader go back up to the start of the story to get straight who is who.
Good start but quite unbelievable. It all comes together way to fast. The teacher being a porn actress was to much. I didn't like her or the so called mom. Nice try but no brass ring
We've got to have a sequel to this one, it would be a sin, not too!
A little rushed with some teacher identity problems.
This story seems to be more of a male directed fantasy rather than by a lady with lesbian experience. Very much in the wham bam school of porno writing.
Lexie
Nice idea, great start, it did feel a little rushed at the end, but I like where you were trying to go with it...!
A bit rushed, try expanding things a little and build some sexual excitement...... Name changed from Carla to Clara.