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by nearlydoc

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sandymonroesandymonroeover 9 years ago

IT's missing the dialogs completely :(

nearlydocnearlydocover 9 years agoAuthor
Dialog

Please explain to me what the dialogs are, Thanks.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Embarrassing

I'm Australian and this was just plain embarrassing!

The "story" reads like it was "written" by a 15yo Austrian - NOT Australian - or at least, someone to whom English is a second language.

I won't even bother picking bits out - the whole thing is just bad, bad, BAD.

nearlydocnearlydocabout 9 years agoAuthor
Well why is it bad.

Tell me why it is bad --- So I can get better.

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