Note: You can change font size, font face, and turn on dark mode by clicking the "A" icon tab in the Story Info Box.
You can temporarily switch back to a Classic Literotica® experience during our ongoing public Beta testing. Please consider leaving feedback on issues you experience or suggest improvements.
Click here"Wow." He heard Sue say softly. He slowly pulled out and cum began flowing out of her pussy. She rolled over and looked at the mess. The cum dripped out of her, onto the desk, and then onto the floor.
"You really let loose there tiger." She said. "That was definitely the best sex I've ever had, so I'm going to do you a few favors. First is advice. Bring condoms next time. This was special and I was too busy loosing my mind to tell you but you really shouldn't have came in me." She saw the panicked look in his eyes. "No, it's fine for this time. I'm in the safest part of my cycle, I think. Secondly, I want to keep doing this, which means I need you to clean yourself up and get your ass home to your wife and child. If you are forced to leave the school then the fun is done. I'm use to cleaning up messes like this so I'll stay and clean it up while you go tell your wife you were working late."
Against his better judgment he quickly ran to the locker room and cleaned himself up. He changed into the spare outfit he kept at work and quickly drove home. At home his wife was upset that he had to work late but so thankful that her husband was home to help with the baby.
- COMMENTS
RTR108 months agoGreat first story. Really enjoyed it but....a little bit of constructive criticism. I agree that you need an editor, nothing major, just a few small errors. But to me it felt rushed. This guy has a wonderful, beautiful wife who is wild in bed, a new baby & a great job....why, during ONE school day (what, 8hrs?), would he jeopardize that? No explanation for it. He is around these girls every day & has been doing this job for years. Why is he getting worked up over them now? Maybe if the story took place over a couple of weeks or a month or two. Show these girls slowly wearing him down. Which leads me to the last problem. Too many characters that served no real purpose, very briefly thrown in over the course of the day. Should have fleshed these characters out more than just a physical description. The teacher at lunch made it seem like these girls pick a teacher to crush on & flirt with. This was told, not shown. Again, would have loved more build up & anticipation. This is just my opinion. I look forward to reading more of your work.
