All Comments on 'Teacher Michele Loses Control'

Great start! I prefer the stories to be a bit longer, especially with the good buildup you did. But I'm looking forward to reading the next chapter! 5 stars, especially for a first submission

...but for the next chapter, maybe have her take the class for a field trip somewhere, where she and young Jimmy could finally get together, and he might learn what a woman's cunt felt like on the other end of his massive, turgid erection...yada, yada, yada. You are a good writer, with quite a creative (one might say EVIL, or at least WICKED) imagination. Let us see that imagination put to good (or bad, it all depends on your point of view) use.

YOMEYO

What you wrote there is better than a lot of efforts. Looking forward to him being invited to her apartment in part 2 to conclude this hot adventure.

While I'd have liked to see a longer, teasing build up, that's only a personal preference.

There's no denying that this is better writing than most of the stuff posted here and I wanted to acknowledge that.