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"You're evil," I said, grinning at her, when she released me.
"Scared?" she asked.
"If I ever pull something like that, you have my full permission to haunt my ass until I straighten up."
"We've been together for more than a year now, Danny. Not once have you given me a reason to do anything other than to love you to death."
~~~
We arrived at the kitchen to find Nadia's mom cooking breakfast while my dad sat and chatted with her. When he saw us, Pop stood to his feet and applauded - a huge smile on his face. My bride-to-be beamed and took a dramatic bow.
Her mother laughed and said, "Your father didn't sleep very well. He might be a little slow this morning."
"Is breakfast ready?" she asked.
Her mother looked around at all of the food she was preparing and then turned back and said, "Yes."
"I'll get him," she said - an evil grin on her face.
She pounded on his door like she was a DEA officer, raiding a crack house at 2:00am. She yelled, "Breakfast is getting cold. Get out here."
She waited at the door until he appeared.
"What was that you used to tell me?" she said. "Turn that frown upside-down."
He tried to glare at her, but she gave him a look that could have turned Medusa to stone.
"Good morning, baby girl," he said, not quite smiling.
"Good morning, father. My husband and I are going to eat breakfast with your lovely wife and my father-in-law. Won't you come and join us?"
"I would be delighted," he replied - not quite looking delighted.
"Good - because - as soon as we've eaten, I'm going to hurry home with my man and get him to fill my pussy with his seed. It's been a while since we could just spend a little quality time together."
With that, she turned and came back to sit beside me.
As her dad arrived at the breakfast bar, Nadia's mom laughed and said, "You know you've brought this on yourself. Take your medicine like a man."
He looked at her and started to say something but she held up a finger.
"Do NOT tell me she gets this from me. Her stubborn vindictiveness is 100% you, my love."
His shoulders slumped and he said, "You're right."
"Write that down!" Nadia's mom told her.
My lover - and her mom - cackled in laughter.
Nadia stood, hugged her father, and said, "Poor daddy."
The smile I hadn't seen since we'd arrived finally appeared as he wrapped his little girl in a hug.
~~~
The end. Thanks for reading!
- COMMENTS
Anonymous6 months agoLoved it. Part 2? Nadia is such a firecracker, I love her. My one concern is that her attitude doesn't cause her to do something silly. For example, they have an argument (inevitable), she goes and gets drunk and fucks someone in a blind rage. Yeah, that will spell the end of their marriage. As long as she can avoid that, they should be golden.
dick_harden7 months agoI loved it. It was so well written. The pace was frantic, and the sex was hot, like their affair. It was fun, uplifting and happy, never too serious. Very creative. Great work, and of course there is not another chapter. This stands on its own, complete. 5 stars
Anonymous7 months agoYou write well. Some of these critiques may have some validity, or may not. I liked what I read, and hope for future installments. In terms of the critiques, take what you need--and leave the rest. Most of those that I read weren't delivered with much respect, in my opinion. Be willing to learn/grow, but write only, ever, for you.
Anonymous7 months agoVery good story but you should’ve elaborated on how Nadia knew he wasn’t taking her classes like she was already eyeing him before
LenardSpencer7 months agoSo, we are meant to believe that a very good looking, sexy, woman of approx 25/26 falls in lust with an 18 year old High School kid? She must have had her BA degree, plus a Teaching Diploma, plus at least one year of teaching. So, around age 25/26. The difference in maturity levels would be great. Also, playing "Russian Roulette" by going out on "dates" in public, holding hands and kissing and going into Bars (I think this is set in USA with their drackonian Drinking Laws). This is just stupid. Anyone could have seen them. She risked being terminated and labeled a Sex Predator by having sexual relations with a student at her High School.
If they had met up on holiday or something and it was all about "Lust" it would be understandable.
Then, right from the first "session" she's telling him she wants a long-term relationship! LOL.
Whitewaterbum7 months agoLike the storyline BUT your description of the physical anatomy was very poor. Other than a towel and black bra and panties Nadia clothing were not mentioned. As a student when I was young, I would fantasize about my female teacher’s undergarments depending upon what their outer clothing were. Also does she wear high heels? Hosiery? How does wear her hair? Etc.
Monagamous_Now7 months agoI'm sad that this is 'the end' - what an awesome tale. Love it - especially the interaction between Nadia and her dad - that part was very well done, I think.
Great story - 5/5
