by Sunnie
Don't stop now. I very much enjoyed the deceptive simplicity of this piece. You have a sophisticated style, deceiving the reader into thinking this easy flow was achieved without effort. Unless you did this without hard work - then I'm jealous!
My only comment is finish the damn story....I hate cliffhangers!!! Seriously, the whole series is a good, quick easy read and very well written. Props to you. Out.
You have me totally hooked... I love the way your story flows. Now continue the damn thing, please!!