by Oldbroad76
Great build up! What happens when they meet? Do sparks fly? Or does it turn into a disaster? I’m looking forward to finding out.
Why end it there? There's certainly room to finish the story in one chapter. Did you just get lazy, or run of enthusiasm for the story. You give no indication of a part two. I don't give unfinished stories more than a 2. Better luck next time.
I gave it 3*. It would have been much better if they, at least, had met. That would have given the readers something to think about.. Just my opinion.
Awesome, totally believable, and a good read. I'm hoping it doesn't take long for part 2!
Thanks for not making this another cheating whore wife, hit by a Martian Slut Ray. Here's hoping it doesn't end up as yet another world's largest cock story. We already have 18,000 of them on this site, and they're all stupid.
I tried to chat with you but failed. I think I you wrote this story to toy with the idea of what would a young adult male do with a more mature female. The teacher and student scenario may be what every young man thinks about when he dreams of an older woman. I did make a psuedo comment to a high school art teacher about her 67 T-bird, saying “nice body”. At once I realized what that sounded like and mentioned the car. I also touched my algebra teacher inappropriately when I had to stay after class due to some comment I made. I commented on her hair and stroked it. Nothing more happened with either teacher, just let the one remark be an ice breaker….