All Comments on 'Teaching Celina Ch. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
shorter

This chapter would be nearly a full page shorter in length with all the "word... word" and "word -- word" type items removed. Use a coma, semi-colon, or end the sentence; maybe even a blank space is preferred to this insult and eye strain for readers.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
Wow!

Your story is absolutely fantastic; please keep writing! Can't wait for more!

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago

Reminds me of a mature lady, Suzzanne, she used to cumm the same when her nipples were bitten

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
This is WAY better than the first part.

n/t

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