by zenarcade
This chapter would be nearly a full page shorter in length with all the "word... word" and "word -- word" type items removed. Use a coma, semi-colon, or end the sentence; maybe even a blank space is preferred to this insult and eye strain for readers.
Your story is absolutely fantastic; please keep writing! Can't wait for more!
Reminds me of a mature lady, Suzzanne, she used to cumm the same when her nipples were bitten