All Comments on 'Teaching Her a Lesson Pt. 30'

Ice Bear (the author) here. I hope everyone enjoyed the read at least half as much as I enjoyed writing it. If you dig it and want more, or want to toss me a tip, check out my patreon (http://patreon.com/icebear).

Talk about left wanting more. One of the best series that's been on here, period

I was wondering about all that makeup work he threw away. Tied everything up perfectly AND left us with the clear impression that those two are going to work it out in the end.

Like any great story it needs a sequel

Probably the bwst saga I have seen here. Kept me checking for updates for months, and enjoying the twists and turns.

Good writing and well thought out long term plots are extremely rare here. It's great to see when it happens. You've raised the bar.

A sequel is needed. My suggestion: Taylor gets herself into college, takes some philosophy and psych courses and starts proving to Canon that his tastes need broadening because he doesn't know what he wants like she knows what he wants. And of course he's like a pig complaining about all the shit he's rolling in.

More - some sorta of updates at least of what's going on with the crew.

I’ve been a fan since the first thing you posted here (and icebear’s other venue). All of your work has been enjoyable, well written, and extremely clever. This time you’ve surpassed yourself.

While the temptation is to clamber for a sequel I would advise against one. Where would Canon go from here? That being said you might consider an extended postscript a year or two from now giving us the story of the reunification we all suspect is coming.

Thank you on behalf of all the lazy bastards who can’t be bothered to comment much less hit that five star button. I truly look forward to your next great, hilarious, thought provoking, and vastly entertaining work.

asianToy

Good read definitely one if not the best I've seen on this site

Easily one of the greatest stories on this site. Supremely good characterization and no cookie cutter characters.

I find it amazing that some readers think Canon won. Impossible. He was, to quote the bard, “hoisted on his own petard.”

And he really deserves it.

Kinda like reading “Don Juan” by Byron - but with real world ramifications.

He has three years of constant pussy being thrown at him, which should cause his moral compass to vivisect him.

If you’re titillated but not horrified by Canon - check yourself.

It didn't - doesn't - fit with your theme or intended direction at all, but it might have been nice to see Taylor wind up as a bondage slave in spite of herself. Maybe through Tabitha getting creative and manipulating her into a situation where it can be done.