All Comments on 'Teams Colliding Pt. 02: Blackmailed'

Bravo! This was a worthy part 2 to a fantastic part 1!

Well done and enjoying this series. Would like to read about Anne and other college aged single or married women being conquered by selfish undeserving men in a nc/reluc manner. Yes yes.

Well I thought she was going to really get doubled, not just spit roasted.

But now it is time for Adam to show back to the room and help Anne understand how Mandy could take three guys at once. Ben can now claim her third virgin hole and work her tight little cheer leader butt hole while Matt fills her mouth and Adam gets to be third into that tight, hot and slippery pussy. She will learn what it is to really get laid.

Anne will now be a real cheer leader.. The team slut for the season.

Please keep it going !!!!

I decided to re-read the first installation of this series, and what do you know?! There’s an update! Thank fuck I checked back, because this is an amazing sequel that I would’ve hated to miss. The way that Ben behaves so aggressively but still cuddles with her at the end, the way that Anne keeps protesting but can’t stop getting wet—that dichotomy is such a turn-on. I live for that. 🤤

Of course, can’t wait for a third addition of Anne and Ben’s storyyyy.

Sorry but I couldn't read this one after the jock divulged he was playing a game with her. Part one I could explain away in my mind as the exuberance of young hormones and opportunity gone wild but when the jock makes it clear he wants more instead of apologizing profusely for taking advantage of her, that makes it criminal in my mind.

please tell me that Ben will apologise in the near future and they'll have a happy ever after

its fucked up, i know, but well

im a sucker for romance

or you could just send it to me if you're not comfortable posting it or something if you do decide to write it

overall, i did love this but well a happy ever after would be much appreciated :)

Great story!

Next you have to have Adam show up and fuck Anne. They all fall asleep with Anne between Adam and Ben. SHe gives them all blowjobs the next morning and goes back to her room. After the game, Anne is forced into a gangbang and is later given the morning after pill (afterall Ben is not a complete jerk). Anne becomes the team mascot and goes with them to all of the games but she is the only cheerleader on that team's bus. One can guess what happens afterwards but let's let the author show their creative imagination and find out what adventures await Anne. Hope she does not get pregnant and drop out of school and becomes a whore (which happens too many times in these kind of stories). Maybe she gets some real love and falls in love.

it was good. I would liked to see them as a couple, there are so many stories where the girl ends up a slut. I'd like to see them eventually become a couple, fall in love maybe?. its not my story so you decide what you want.

I really love this story. I would love to see more but if not this is a great ending too!

maybe get their names right next time? on the first one, you called her alice and then here, matt suddenly became adam then matt again

Hey MossTabby, good story. Have to wonder how many girls and young women lost it just like this. And before, say 10 or 20 years ago, before Positive consent (right term? sorry I'm old-school),

contracts signed in triplicate, notarized, and submitted to the court clerk for safe keeping....

Ok Ok Ok. Sorry. You're right. It IS important. And seems to be working. As far as I know, a lot more (I mean A LOT MORE) young people are having a lot more sex and it seems without a lot of the hang ups of past generations. And safe sex too. And fewer unwanted pregnancies.... So I guess maybe it works. And maybe slut-shaming and stud-faming will go away too. Always thought that was stupid.

Didn't mean to make this into as political monologue. Sorry.

I did mean to bust balls of Anonymous comment about getting names right. (???)

Dude! Shut up! You're getting this stuff for free. Most of these writers don't have editors. They are just one person trying to entertain you. So shut the fuck up. Geez.

I really loved both stories. You’re a wonderful writer. I hope you write some more. Thank you!

Nice development of plot and character, and hot. Fascinated to see where it goes next.

It's very good, the Author needs to complete the story with several more Chapters.

Oh my God I really loved this! I'm waiting patiently for next chaps ♥

This is really one of the best story i ever read. Great development. Want next parts. Please.

Wow great story please do more chapter's

Hope you add another part soon would love to see her end up pregnant in the end.

The truth came out 9 months later when she my wife Sara that I married because she was pregnant and I really loved her and both parents were upset and proud at the same time delivered a black baby girl and I walked out to the delivery waiting room. Both of our parents were calling out to me as I was not stopping to talk. I just said asked your lovely daughter she will need all the support she can get because that black SOB will probably not help he hasn't supported his last child and I even heard of any girl having an abortion. The room went silent and I walked on. I called a lawyer the next morning and started the divorce. I guess I was lucky we had only been married 6 months and it was easy to tell I was not the father. I guess the bbc with the baby big black balls won yes she and I had sex but I always wore protection. Good thing because who knew what he might have been carrying. Her brother was my best friend and all he could do was apologize for her . I finally said stop it or never come around me again. He said ok but I'm going to tell you one more thing and you probably won't believe me but he said he thought it was the truth. What ever say it and get done. She said she never had sex with anyone but me. I said your right I don't believe you. He said let me finish. Do you remember when your uncle passed and you were away? Yes. Well she I and some friends went to that party over at Bedford. Yes go on. Well I have been checking things out and found out that there were some black dudes there and it ended up that no one invited them and don't know who they were. Go on. He said when he was ready to leave he found Sara asleep in a bed I thought she was drunk because he had to carry her to the car at home he was very quiet so not to wake their parents. They were against drinking. It all makes sense to me he said please talk to her she is sick I mean love sick she doesn't even want to leave the house and dad and mom have been taking her to a therapist please I'm begging you I know you love her and it's not her fault or that little girl. I went and seen her after talking to mom and dad. When I walked in their house her mother came to me hugged and was crying. Her dad hugged and smacked my back saying good to see you. Her mother said Sara someone is here to see you. I feeding Alice can they wait for a little bit? Her mom looked at me with a look asking me. I didn't know what was wrong I couldn't speak. Her mom said I think that will be fine. We walked to the kitchen and I accepted a glass of water. Sara came into the kitchen carrying Alice. She locked up and stared at me her mom took Alice and Sara lunged to me and hugged cried and was repeating I'm sorry over and over. I said I'm sorry for not hearing you out before I took off. She said that she didn't know how she ever got pregnant and that is the God's honest truth. We got back together and now have 3 of our own children. When Alice was older she had a lot of questions. Along with a therapist we explained that her mother was rapped. Things were as normal as could be. Alice told us that I was the best dad and father she could ever have had.

I would love to see a conclusion to this amazing piece of writing and what becomes of Anne .I assume the "plan B" pill is just a fake as what guy carry's around a plan b with them would love to see what she has to do to get the second half of her "plan B" and will they tell her she needs to get a real one asap or is motherhood in her immediate future.

You have written an amazing Story. Please write a conclusion as soon as possible.

More please love the series so far

The first part was ok 👌🏽, but this was just trash

Good story except the close, with Matt feasting on her pussy, I think it would get kinda crowded with Ben sucking on her clit.

Continue!

Next part please!

A small request to the author,

I would like to see if this will develop into these scenarios, please author:

Scenario 1: a love triangle (so that the readers will get stressed out and will keep us anticipated and at the edge of our seats lol, but don't make her indecisive like those cliché heroine in some stories. Like, "oohh~ I like person A~ but I also have feelings for person B~" don't pick someone right away if they're unsure. And if you don't like someone say it straight away, it's a waste of time to be with someone if you don't like them anyway. I know, the blackmail part, but just please. Don't make her a damsel in distress.

Scenario 2: Ben will keep on using Anne but will slowly get jealous of Anne because she's banging other guys but she wouldn't develop feelings for him--not right away anyway because.... Ahem, realism and for the thrill. But she will later on fall for him after making efforts of apologizing to her but even if Anne forgives him, he's still being consumed by guilt.

Scenario 3: Kinda connected to scenario 1 but Matt and Anne are just friends but Ben is still jealous of them but he didn't know how to make the first move to get her attention. (A kinda plain scenario yet interesting at the same time. I know I'm contradicting myself but...); and

Scenario 4: One of Ben's exes? Maybe? Or her best friend! (A plot twist, Anne's friend and Ben fucked one time way before Anne transferred? Not sure if she's from another school but I know she's not from that school sorry, I have a problem with my memory but she became obsessed with him and tried to act normal but she's fuming when Ben was trying to make Anne sit on his lap, in reference to part 1) she will try to talk to Anne to separate the two of them but Matt is still in the picture trying to woo Anne. Kinda like a a love square? (If that exists, lol) Or Matt can become just a friend but will slowly have feelings for her.

Note: in all of these scenarios Anne won't catch feelings first or right away just because the guy apologized one time or that the guy will quickly forget about it because we want a strong badass female lead. This applies to both Ben and Matt.

Anyway! We will wait for more author! I really love your work! I'm so excited! Keep up the good work author!

Next part pleaseeeee

God I really want romance to bloom hereeee

Next couple of chapters?

The 3rd roommate returns and gets his turn, then they make her air tight.

The rest of the team members start dropping by for a turn

Finally the coaches stop by

Just say’n

Any more ??😢😢

If there was ever a part 3 I'd love to see her wake up to find several more football players in the room, and then have her forced down on the bed and have a train rain on her against her will. She's the perfect little pushover and it would be great to watch distress as she gets passed around by the team.

Loved it.

Anna has to get the rest of the team!

Loved it

Anna

Tetszett a befejezés. Ugye lehet erőszak nélkül is hármasban szeretkezni és a lánynak is jó így..

Meh

Would like for Ben to keep her close, mold her submissiveness, fall for her (and like to share her, selectively) and make it to the pros, then reward her growing trust by taking care of her and all the babies.

I like matt

I don't like forcing sex...............

Great story!

More!! Thx

Wonderful

Loved both chapters ...the way she feel asleep so quick makes me think that was a sleeping pill rather than a plan B pill. She must be waking to more cock!

Great story. Love it.

Loved both chapters. The way Anne fell asleep so fast makes me think that was a sleeping pill, not a plan B pill. I could see her waking up to more cock.

Great Story! Please continue the series!