All Comments on 'Tease'

Good premise.

But bad story.

Sex happens much too fast. No preliminaries. No teasing. No foreplay.

She notices his hard cock. She's got it in her mouth. He cums.

So many possibilities unfulfilled. No conversation about why his cock was hard. No conversation about how badly he needed to cum. No conversation about what it was about her appearance that mad him so hard. No conversation about whether he'd be masturbating to calm himself down. No suggesting that maybe she could help.

Not even, really a decent beginning.

Three stars.