All Comments on 'Teddy Bear for Valentines Day'

Nothing original and not well written. The only thing you left out is "hands up " "I cant breathe"

It was a bit rushed. Keep writing but slow it down some, anticipation is what makes a great story. Re-read your stories before submitting them, that way you know if it's something that you're happy with or not.

Thank you for this story, very sexy read!

Your writing ability alone puts you in the top 10% of contributers and there were some nice creative touches; I particularly liked the 'mommy ... ' line, very hot!

This story needs to be in Nonconsent/Reluctance instead of Interracial.

not into interracial rape but if you keep writing, ill give your stories a read. she did sound hot though. possibly make this a series with her fucking her way through college?