by TeenStudforOlderWomen
Chapter 1
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Chapter numbers belong in the title to warn it's not a complete story, NOT in the story!
Nothing wrong with the idea, but it’s too stilted and doesn’t flow, so that makes it difficult to read. Try reading the ‘phone conversation out loud and you’ll see. I don’t think you got the use of ‘your/you’re’ right once, and each time, you make the reader pause. Pity.
I liked the concept, but was disappointed that You didn’t give us the sexy details of Mrs Bradford and Hunter back at the motel. Hopefully a part two is being written.
Idiarry52,
I appreciate your feedback. I just may write a follow up story of the sex scene with Mrs. Bradford and Hunter.
Great build up but it would be wonderful to read about the action between those two lovers. I would like to learn about her naked body and her reaction to his attentions.
I know my mom's interns who did her at a company she worked for like 10-20 years ago. She was late 40s/early 50s and they were at their mid 20s. Not properly escorts, but business toyboys.