All Comments on 'Teenage Domme Ch. 01: Subjugation'

by JackFrostFire

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AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

If the housekeeper is a black woman, Barbara will be put hard at work scrubbing dirty floors while getting her corpulent ass reddened with a thin black whip. And the black woman will make a proposition to Barbara to make Katie available to her growing 18 year old black Adonis and start slapping Barbara's reddening corpulent cheeks until she confidently gives her assent with tears flowing down her humiliating red cheeks.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

CHAPTER 2, PLEASE.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

very good story

While waiting for the continuation, the parts where the lawyer Barbara is are very hot.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

This is a fantastic start to what promises to be a great series. I loved the original stories and like a lot of ppl, I can't wait to continue both storylines 15/10. Can you say when you will be publishing more chapters please.

JackFrostFireJackFrostFireover 1 year agoAuthor

Hey there... Thanks for the compliment! I'm actively writing, so hopefully it won't be too long now for the next installment to appear (like in a couple months). I expect to publish even more stuff over the next 6 months. I have slowed down a little since 2020, when I spent a lot of time at home for obvious reasons. Then I did a lot of revising over the past year or so, which I wanted to do before posting another chapter here, since posting a new chapter tends to draw new readers. But now I'm moving forward. Thanks for asking!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

You are an excellent writer.

kbone1kbone18 months ago

It's very good! I am sorry to see it end so quickly

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I've been married for 24 years to a loving wife. I'm just starting to post stories online. I love tales about pushing envelopes. Domination/submission is a favorite theme, as are illicit seductions... seductions of strangers, milfs, teachers, students, friends, even family me...