by Barbosa
Hey, Barbosa, we're ready for chapter 2 - when's it coming??
An enjoyable story, but we need to know how this relationship develops. it is an excellent beginning,
ROBERTODAVO,
I enjoyed the gradual character build up and the introduction of a female. Now let's see how this one progresses...
Interesting. Was expecting a kind of post apocalyptic type story. I enjoyed the story thanks.