All Comments on 'Telepath King Ch. 06'

more more more we need more.......

It is a great stry you have started and i am already becoming a fan. so keep them coming

...please sort out "you're" versus "your".

Solid start to a potentially great story... So many story lines, I don't know where you are going next! Keep them coming.

Thanks to all of you for your, or is it you're? feedback. I'm sorry for that error. it seems to be an issue in my stories. I don't know why I do it that way and I've tried to fix it as much as I can, I guess some keep getting by me.

I do spell and grammar check but I'm not perfect. I would hope that even those can be a pain when you're/your reading but if you just look past that, I hope I'm writing a story that is interesting and something that you want to keep reading.

I go through each chapter before I submit it but I'm not perfect, more like a novice with great aspirations. Thanks again for reading and you're feedback.

I've really enjoyed the entire series so far and hope that you'll continue to add more chapters. As far as the you're/your issue, don't worry too much about it - I've been sorting them out in my mind as I go along. Keep up the good work!

You have a really good story here. Thank you for your efforts. If you are having problems sorting out the your to you're--just remember that you're is a contraction for you are. If you can interchange the sentence with "you are", then you have a contraction.

Since I kept seeing flickers of decency in the protagonist I tried to hang on and made it this far before I lost hope.

Unfortunately your protagonist comes across as both inconsistent in his behavior and too willing to succumb to the temptations of power so I find it hard to empathize with him or care what happens to him.