All Comments on 'Tell It to the Judge'

Interesting twist, needs more, to barebone.

geeze people it's a flash story :D good little tale

How hard is it to actually write a proper ending? It must be a monumental task since you seem to be incapable of doing it for most of your stories.

In every story is like you purposefully use SAT and/or STOOD, instead of SITTING and/or STANDING.

stop that.

I see the usual haters are out in force for this one. So, I will give you back story. ALL of the women were addicted to Narcotics. Wifey was originally “ turned out”, by her sister. After she got addicted to the Heroin, she was a willing participant. After the bust, hubby was able to divorce her, no problem. She ended up on the streets, after her contacting HIV and Hepatitis, made her a liability for the gang. If you can stomach looking at her scabby, pot marked face, $30.00 will get you a BJ. $60.00, anal sex. But you better wear a condom. Her sister got pregnant. The gang sold the baby. She is still with them, and gets a commission every time she lures a young, fresh woman into their lifestyle. This is the end....

All ways the same its the others that get the 'good' to go bad as they hate to see goody foodies doing well.

That's it?

I hope you are having a laugh at those who claim there wasn't an ending.

There certainly was. Those who need to have everything spelled out need to realize that maybe they are the problem.

Love it 5*

I know you people think it's complete but even though I live in the UK would the girls been charged with prostitution, as I don't recollect any money being passed! OK there were drugs, so the supply to the girls might be construed as payment. The problem with me is I like long stories and would have liked to be told the outcome of the trial/s. Otherwise a good story and that means 4*.

⭐⭐⭐⭐ A little short.

I always love that line: But honey it's not what it looks like, or I can explain. I love it, This one was certaintly short and not sos sweet. Funny how some women do the BTB thing to themselves and others just swap partners and go on their merry way while us trusting husbands wallow in our misery, something wrong there. good story

Short and bitter, ending with some sour karma. Great short story.

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Short & Snappy!

Sweet!

11/10!!!!!

Femdom agitprop goes criminal?

Tepid

Awaiting the end ... great start, but left unfinished.

Great start but where's the ending?

Weak

Not even 1/2 a story

And then what happened?

Not bad. Did kind of left it hanging.

Idiot, finish your story.

Could've been a 3 or 4 star story. But it's left unfinished so 2 stars. I can't stand these authors that write a story until a certain point then stop. Bob

Always amused by the moron commentators who are so completely lacking in imagination that they complain the story doesn't include the complete life of the great grandchildren...

Loved it.

I have to say that this was a very happy ending. At least in the justice area. Finding out your wife is a whore is heartbreaking true....

That being said, the divorce should be fairly straightforward so, there is a small silver lining to this storm cloud?

Sincerely,

Payenbrant

Excellent.