All Comments on 'Tell It to the Judge'

Excellent.

I have to say that this was a very happy ending. At least in the justice area. Finding out your wife is a whore is heartbreaking true....

That being said, the divorce should be fairly straightforward so, there is a small silver lining to this storm cloud?

Sincerely,

Payenbrant

Loved it.

Always amused by the moron commentators who are so completely lacking in imagination that they complain the story doesn't include the complete life of the great grandchildren...

Could've been a 3 or 4 star story. But it's left unfinished so 2 stars. I can't stand these authors that write a story until a certain point then stop. Bob

Idiot, finish your story.

Not bad. Did kind of left it hanging.

And then what happened?

Not even 1/2 a story

Weak

Great start but where's the ending?

Awaiting the end ... great start, but left unfinished.

Tepid

Femdom agitprop goes criminal?

[01.04.23]

Short & Snappy!

Sweet!

11/10!!!!!

Short and bitter, ending with some sour karma. Great short story.

I always love that line: But honey it's not what it looks like, or I can explain. I love it, This one was certaintly short and not sos sweet. Funny how some women do the BTB thing to themselves and others just swap partners and go on their merry way while us trusting husbands wallow in our misery, something wrong there. good story

⭐⭐⭐⭐ A little short.

I know you people think it's complete but even though I live in the UK would the girls been charged with prostitution, as I don't recollect any money being passed! OK there were drugs, so the supply to the girls might be construed as payment. The problem with me is I like long stories and would have liked to be told the outcome of the trial/s. Otherwise a good story and that means 4*.

Love it 5*

I hope you are having a laugh at those who claim there wasn't an ending.

There certainly was. Those who need to have everything spelled out need to realize that maybe they are the problem.

That's it?

All ways the same its the others that get the 'good' to go bad as they hate to see goody foodies doing well.

I see the usual haters are out in force for this one. So, I will give you back story. ALL of the women were addicted to Narcotics. Wifey was originally “ turned out”, by her sister. After she got addicted to the Heroin, she was a willing participant. After the bust, hubby was able to divorce her, no problem. She ended up on the streets, after her contacting HIV and Hepatitis, made her a liability for the gang. If you can stomach looking at her scabby, pot marked face, $30.00 will get you a BJ. $60.00, anal sex. But you better wear a condom. Her sister got pregnant. The gang sold the baby. She is still with them, and gets a commission every time she lures a young, fresh woman into their lifestyle. This is the end....

In every story is like you purposefully use SAT and/or STOOD, instead of SITTING and/or STANDING.

stop that.

How hard is it to actually write a proper ending? It must be a monumental task since you seem to be incapable of doing it for most of your stories.

geeze people it's a flash story :D good little tale

Interesting twist, needs more, to barebone.

Another great build up of a story that had so much potential, but the supposed writer doesn’t believe in or doesn’t know how to write a complete story with an actual full on ending that makes it complete!!!

So damn sad and such a waste…………

A simple short story with a nice little sting in the tail, even if that does require a little "suspended-disbelief" Could perhaps work well in the "Humour" category?

Should this {As my sister's wife passed me she spat} be replaced with:- "as my wife's sister passed....."?

Dick.

At first, it wasn't what I imagined... For me, the betrayed husband would come up with some hard and cruel way to resolve the differences with the traitorous bitch, her whore sister-in-law and the "bad" boys.

And I imagined husband, rotting behind bars by the possible "carnage".

So the husband was a man of the Law... how ironic, for bitches and all.

And the whole thing worked out, the bad guys got arrested and the bitches too.

Okay... there could be an epilogue about the guys being abused in jail and being the wives of "Bubbas", the sister-in-law getting some beatings, sporadic, as well as his ex-wife's main bitch.

Of course she should suffer some emotional injuries, such as the exposure of her prostitution activities to relatives, friends and co-workers and the glimpse of everything she threw away on account of becoming a slut.

I had given 3 stars, as I always do, when the author deserves to have his writing effort rewarded. But after the second reading, I went up to 4 stars.

The author completely deceived me and ended with a happy ending... at least I am very happy with the result of the police investigation.

But that's just my opinion.

You primed the pump. I was ready for the end. With the speed with which you got from start to end (much appreciated) a proper finish would have been welcomed.

Would have preferred if you would have finished the story completely (losing her job etc. for the bitch). But still solid story. The aftermath would have been hillarious to read.

A disgusting display of betrayal. But redeemed in the immediate dispassionate comeuppance required.

I wanted to hear her story

Tsk, tsk! You want to play you got to PAY. Good story. Keep writing. Thank you.

good story 4* cant be a 5 when you dont finish it or follow it up

That was a wicked twist and another dumb broad.

I thought you said there WASN'T a happy ending! Lol cheers *****

Wish there could have been a follow-up. When she's in her jailhouse orange, him explaining the upcoming divorce. He can ask, did you buy any Tupperware?

Twist got me first time

Knew what was coming and still enjoyed

A detective and didn't know what his wife was doing

3 stars

You arena master of the short flash story. Enjoyed it.

...and very dark. Good that he let her experience the fruits of her labors.

Obviously she gets charged for prostitution and jailed. Who pays bail? Surely not hubby. And she gets kicked to the curb. He's more than angry - he's embarrassed.

I mean this is the nature of "Flash" stories. Most leave a lot hanging. But the best, like this one, point to the finish line. It's the ones that truly leave things in the air, with multiple possible directions that leave me unsatisfied.

5-stars

Finish The Damn Story!

Mr. Ease You Sounded Resigned At The End Of The Story. .Like Here It Is?.... Whatever!

Smile And The World Will Smile With You? "That's What My Preacher Man Said"

Thanks Brit For This Great Story★ ★ ★ ★ ★ WOOF!

You lose a point for not finishing. It did show promise though but finishing it up with a two paragraph epilogue would have a 5.

Hope you get around to finishing it.

5*

Some fucking detective the sad-assed husband turned out to be. Couldn't even detect that his wife had been fucking around on him for a year!

One cop I know had to write speeding tickets for both his wife and his mother-in-law. Another cop went on a domestic dispute and had the privilege of putting handcuffs on his wife and her boyfriend. Another policeman was first on the scene where a drug dealer shot and killed a customer, the policeman's wife. Yet another policeman responded to a traffic accident that resulted in the nonfatal injury of his wife. She had been giving her boyfriend oral sex and he veered into the lane of oncoming traffic. The boyfriend was killed and the policeman's wife had a list of serious, but nonfatal injuries. It happens more often than one may expect.

dirty work: somebody's got to do it.

the brevity makes it better

Nice short with a twist!

yet harms every-one. TK U MLJ LV NV

Too short!!!!!

That's what she deserved...And the only regrets he had were to have meet her some day in his life...What a stupid bitch...Married to a Detective Inspector and behave like she did and with mobsters...Pleaseeeeeeeee...

she explained she was with her sister. I think I would have preferred a quiet partner in this escapade, and taken them all out. a gun, or drugs in their drinks, or something, that would not involve the police. try to make sure the wife is the last one to go. maybe a river trip with cement shoes.

How come all the cheating cunts want to explain. "I'll explain it to you later."

Fuck you whore. Stupid cont.

Go To Jail

Go Directly To Jail

Do Not Pass Go

Here I digress

Stay in jail

Fucking worthless cunt

This was such a cool story. GOOD FOR THE BITCH YAY!!!

then to the judge in the divorce court.

see ya! ta ta

A very good story as almost always...thank you...

Thanks for the offering.

'As my sister's wife passed me.' You mean, As my wife's sister passed me.'

Tough luck, Sweetie!

I think they will have a tough job keeping Sweetie in jail (gaol?) very long, unless there is evidence not included in this account! No money was paid to the females (and likely never was!) No drugs were sold by them, and Sweetie was not reported as having even taking any drugs, whether voluntarily or slipped to her. Maybe lewd public behavior and nudity! (Assume cops were either videoing or photoing the 'party!).

The evidence for divorce should be easy. Hope England has less-stupid divorce laws than most US states!

Nice Flasher! 5* (don't usually do that for quickies)

It's called the 'spread of American culture.' Neat story - but not one of your best.

story. Sad but good.

Britain women complete utter moron sluts? I'm just wondering

I think I would like to hear her explanation.

OH YEAH

HA

...and ever so sweet.

How does that expression go? mmm... I know... BURN THE BITCH.

Ha

could have been better with more details and a bit longer. all things concerned, it was great!

Oh, well, welcome to the wide world of prostitution!

It's a very good story but it practically begs for a sequel... perhaps from the wife's point of view explaining how she became entangled in the mess? As it is now, it ends abit unfulfilling. But it's a great start for more though!

Totally undeveloped.

in such a setting, there must be some background. Why did she do it? What let to the weird situation?

Why do you never tell the wifes POV (not to the judge, but to your readers)?

Well the cheating whore got what she wanted, FREEDOM. Nice read Thanks

BH

Totally rock with those stories about men with their junk still intact

I fucking loved it!!!!!!! LOL

He treated her like the whore she was. I thought it was a really great story.

No waste of words, to the point and concise. Very well done!

The problem many authors have is that they drag out a story needlessly. This works the way it is. Perfect.

To use a pun, if you had fleshed out the characters and the story this could have been good. As it was I didn't care for him or her or anyone in the story. Maybe the judge would, but I doubt it.

Could have been a little longer and you know of course that you really should write a follow on story where the wife tries to explain what's going on. Of course I can not imagine any way that she could but then it's your story.

Did I just read a real story of some sort.!

Enjoyable. Didn't mind that it was short or didn't met Harry's definition of a story...Thank you.

Loved the twist at the end ! Needs a 2nd chapter to smooth out the rough ends though. Good story, when you are left wanting more !

It was a short to the point story. Well written. Not every story has to be spelled out in great detail, to be psychoanalyzed to death. Read it for what it is and let it go at that. Well done author, always enjoy reading your stories, good or bad you keep us entertained.

"I know you like to leave some of your stories...". Although I understand the point of these very short stories, I feel there is another story here - the wife's. Plus all the little side stories like having his wife as part of the arrest, associating with a criminal. The impact of that on the case and him. anyway - thanks for the stories and good luck with you writing.

Hey Britease, make a sequel!!!

Something like "Tell It to the Judge- The Trial". I´m curious to know what the stupid wife will say...

... kind of hanging like this, but I think this one is just "too unfinished." Too many loose ends and the overall feeling I get is that the husband wants more of an explanation. I have no doubt he'll go through with letting them throw the book at his soon-to-be-ex-wife, but I feel he wants to hear more of the story.

... either that or you spent some time on a dude ranch recently.Harry is able to come up with enough complaints and what ifs to critique a novel, and it's only a "flash" story as another pointed out.You must be on to something!Pistolpackinpete

Please follow up with this one. I know it is against your usual policy, but I would love to see her explain this one....

Thanks!

Well written, and an original twist. I look forward to more! Sean

Satisfaction doesn't always end with an orgasm. You could take it further but having said what was necessary you ended ...... I was satisfied.

Response so far is more or less as I expected!

Some good --- some not so good!. fair enough!

Sorry about the sister's wife bit, but as some one has pointed out (thank you) in French that would be how you might say it --- Sorry!

I write for my fun and for the reation! I admit it, and obviously I get it, being yet again top of the comments portal. Sorry, but that's what turns me on, and keeps me going.

Thanks everyone

Britease

if you're married and your wife is that much of a whore, and you don't know... you're an asshole and you deserve everything!

We actually liked this one because it was short, to the point and the consequences matched the situation. For once, we did not have some miserable male idiot suffer months of humiliation & other such bull shit [which is typical of this author's usual fare]. Of course, this particular story is only a glimpse of this sad tale but hopefully this seemly non-wimp husband will dump out the slut wife along with the rest of the trash and not recycle this obvious whore.