All Comments on 'Tell Me Again Why My Heels Turn You'

**That was boring and really short. Sorry

"I want to feel you rubbing my cock with your cock through my pants when we're out for dinner."

The above quote would indicate Ana is actually a man. Then...

"His mouth was on her pussy lips, his tongue gently parting them. His left hand was on her clit... "

OK, which is it?

There's a big typo in this story.

Otherwise it is kinda fun for a quickie.

This writing is absolutely confusing !

Author, if you can not see the problems within this writing, then you need to have someone proofread and edit it for you.

If you find a good, slow, proofreader. Have them make corrections on a copy to point out to you what is wrong. This should help you improve your writing abilities

The premise has a lot of potential but I agree, confusing. I couldn't tell if you were going for fetish material (heels, lipstick, cougar) but nothing really materialized. The old/young tags never came through. A lot of gaps to fill in.