Tell Me What You Want Ch. 08

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Hector grunted a nod, still twitching inside of her, his cock craving more of her body even as he dwindled.

"I own you now, do you understand that?"

Hector looked into the pretty face below him, her brows knotted, her expression grave. He nodded. Bea drew him down towards her into a kiss.

"Good boy," she murmured in his ear.

She stripped his wrist and ankle cuffs off, leaving him in just his slave collar, leading him by the little metal D-ring into the bathroom. They showered, then dried each other off, their words light and carefree, unburdened now after passing through that watershed moment. Hector felt again like he always did around Bea, but now there was something behind it too, a new foundation.

Freed from its confines, and after enduring such lengthy neglect, Hector's manhood firmed up again. Bea laughed, allowing herself to be manhandled back into the shower, lingering under the streaming water, making little unhurried fucking motions until she was unable to bear it anymore. She plunged down upon him mercilessly, taking her satisfaction in a way she would have never dreamed was possible with Brent, building them both up to a full-throated climax in the shower stall.

They behaved like teenagers, letting a late breakfast become lunch as Bea became ever more creative in her requirements for worship, demanding orgasm after orgasm like some Roman Empress, until Hector had to beg for mercy on his aching body, and rest.

The setting sun found them on the garden chair, cuddled up together, as naked as they had spent the rest of the day. Hector was curled around her, gently stroking her thigh. Bea backed into his body, pressing her rear against his crotch.

"Finally," she laughed.

"What?"

"Finally comfortable. Nothing poking me in the backside. I think I may have broken you."

"Maybe," Hector replied. "Or maybe I just need a few minutes."

"I think my worship quota is filled for the day."

"Would Mistress care to be worshipped with my lips? They're still willing."

"No, slave, your tribute has been accepted. You may cease."

Bea drew his arms around her, looking up into the sky as the blue tinged into gold.

"You dropped for me, just here, remember?"

"Dropped?"

"Yes. You were cleaning my shorts, remember? I watched you go. One minute Hector was kneeling there in front of me, and then the next...."

She turned in his arms, trying to read his face.

"It was amazing to see it. I got such a thrill. I think I figured it out."

"How it happened?"

"Yeah."

"And?"

Bea delayed her answer, her expression becoming sombre.

"Tell me, Mistress, please," Hector prompted.

"Bea. It needs to be Bea."

"Okay, tell me Bea."

"Rapport," she replied, simply, "Trust."

"Is that it?"

"Yes, but saying that's it makes it sound like an easy thing, when it's not. It's such a delicate thing to establish between two people. The acceptance, the release from responsibility, the faith in the other, the submissive bonding themselves to the dominant."

Bea looked sad.

"What is it, Bea?"

Bea paused, as if unwilling to continue.

"Please, you can tell me," Hector insisted.

"That's the issue. The slave bonds to his mistress. But it's your mistress you bonded to, Heck," Bea told him, her voice dropping to a murmur, "Not your wife."

Hector stared down at Bea's pretty face, glowing in the last light of day, nestled in his arms.

"Tell me what you want, Heck," she said.

"I can't tell you that," he rasped.

Bea sighed, twining her fingers around his.

"Lotte's gonna be here in half an hour," she murmured.

"I know."

Bea looked down at their entwined hands. She was silent for a long time.

"What do we do now?" she asked.

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[Hector, Bea and Lotte will return later in the year, in Total Female Control. Follow me to be notified when the next story begins.

If you like what you read, please leave a comment or a star rating. Constructive feedback is always welcome. If you want further adventures, or to check out my other stories, my story page is here]

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AnonymousAnonymous2 days ago

Best story I ever read. Broad colorful vocabulary. Good character development and spacious insight into the mechanisms of the what conditions it takes for a complete surrender. Not to give up control but to lose the self. Almost like the the Stockholm Syndrone- freedom through surrender

Hotstuff1PHotstuff1P20 days ago

Brilliant ending and of course lead to your next story. I hope that the two are now separate. A wife at home and a caring mistress outside the home who also separates the work situation .

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 month ago

Very well done!

obionequixoteobionequixoteabout 1 month ago

Superb writing - I truly appreciate your attention to spelling and grammar and the level of character development. The story line is captivating, exciting, and makes for great binge reading! Well done!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 month ago

I really loved this story. But if this is the end of the story, it kind of sucks for an ending. Just way to many questions left unanswered, just really to bad. One more chapters, could of answered all to open questions, please write one more chapter..

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 month ago

Great work! It was going in such a bad direction and just when it was almost too much you flipped the story back to one of deep meaning. You are still the best author on the site! Thank you.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 month ago

Lotte’s motivation in sending Hector to be trained by Bea was nonsensical.

Bea was inexperienced, ignorant, and uncommitted and as a novice, could easily damage or destroy Hector’s willingness to play the games that Lottie claimed to love. Bea proceeds to unwittingly put Hector’s life at risk over and over. Making him work in the hot sun all weekend long drinking only a single glass of water and a glass of piss while malnourished was batshit insane.

As the story developed and the personal rapport between Bea and Hector was revealed, it revealed that Lottie’s relationship with Hector was pretty one sided, selfish, and unrewarding.

I began to think of Lotte’s slave contract as a boot scrape that allowed her offload Hector to Bea while minimizing her own guilt at throwing her husband away.

Lottie’s weekend alone had the feel of the “LBD” trope in an LW story, where the husband comes home wayward wife to find his wife dressed in an LBD and she casually announces she’s going on a “date” with her lover. She really does love him, but she needs this, it’s just sex, and she’ll be back on Sunday. Her mysterious author corespondent seems to be the likely affair partner.

It was well-written and tense. The story made me feel uncomfortable because in the midst of the hellacious risk he’s subjected to, Hector seems to take zero enjoyment from being subjected to denigration. This is actually well-worn territory for Oneagainst. it is same formula as Quinn in Alena’s Game.

The side of the story which is more interesting is the seduction and transformation of the Dominant into taking pleasure from cruelty. That would make for a much more interesting storyline.

waynejeffrieswaynejeffriesabout 1 month ago

One of, if not the best author on this site. Your stories are complex, mixing storyline, character development, psychology with pushing boundaries, you capture a very human nature. Thank you for what you provide and I avidly await more.

NightSoulvaneNightSoulvaneabout 2 months ago

I have to say I really liked how you pulled things together for the end of the part. it was a bit of a surprise (at least because of when it's mentioned) that Hector and Lotte's marriage is far more shaky than they've let on at least in terms of Hector's happiness. Opening up there Bea really is lonely and doesn't want to lose her friend in Hector really helped build her up as her own person more as I see both Hector and Bea are the same personality type in the sense both did everything they can/could do to make their partner happy even if they necessarily weren't. I'm waiting for Lotte to be pissed by what's happening and to finally realize how that contract she pulled off the Internet can actually hurt her too. (if she actually cares about Hector which I hope she does) I can't wait for the next part of this to come out later this year. Keep up the great work

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 months ago

Story telling at its peak. Please write next part soon.

lewdkumquatlewdkumquatabout 2 months ago

What a cliffhanger! Bravo - fantastic story telling and triangle drama

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