All Comments on 'Temporary Boyfriend Ch. 06'

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AmbulAmbul28 days ago

They will all be back together soon; Josh is still semi-clueless. Love the story. It looks like a polyamorous romance for sure.

AardieAardie28 days ago

Did he advise Charlotte to have sex with other men? Will he be able to cope with the jealousy?

HarleyRider1955HarleyRider195528 days ago

This story has taken a turn that I’m not sure about. I’ll reserve judgement though because the overall concept is excellent.

AnonymousAnonymous28 days ago

Good premise continues.

But it's all 'story' and the sex is Reader's Digest version. Not NEARLY enough details. Not NEARLY enough step-by-step.

Lacks all prospective dialog among the three during what sex there is.

Four stars. BARELY.

bwpscbwpsc28 days ago

Great story and I'm impressed how quickly you are putting it together.

WoodencavWoodencav27 days ago

Love this storey! ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

NursesNurses27 days ago

Every chapter has been extraordinary.

omahakiwiomahakiwi27 days ago

Great premise. Great progression. Loving it.

Demosthenes384bcDemosthenes384bc27 days ago

The two sisters thing appeals to my little head but the developing plot lines of the future polymorphic relationship divide the attention of my big head in half. 4.1*

Boyd PercyBoyd Percy26 days ago

Double your pleasure, double your fun!

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A note on the story Loosening Up: Yes, it has many many characters. A PDF is available upon request listing the characters and placing them in some kind of perspective for the reader. Just email me (see below). Well over 18 ... even 30, hell 40 is way back there, oh hell, o...

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