All Comments on 'Tempting Trevor Pt. 03'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Man you didnt have to go after nintendo like that lol. How many parts are there to this story? This one was amazing as usual.

HamlinHamlinalmost 2 years agoAuthor

Thank you so much for the feedback. There are 4 parts to this story, and some ideas for future adventures.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Psychological torture is nonsense.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Still a good premise.

Still lacks details.

You wrote: "Her hands slid up Mary's legs as she put her mouth to her pussy, and showed her what a real orgasm was all about." That's it? Blah!

Four stars.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

And then one afternoon the quit but intelligent Mary was bent over the table receiving Staceys strap-on and she realised that she was not afraid of cock, and not very long after the tables had been turned. Stacy was loving her new purpose in life being Trevor and Marys fuck toy and her Mother's ass licker.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

nice to have parents fucked by the slut and then have mom do Trevor's girlfriend

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

This is shit, expecting some brother to put up with being cucked by a skanky sister? Femdom is bad enough normally, but combined with cuckville and the rest of the shit she pulls? Oh, hell no.

No6_ThePrisonerNo6_ThePrisoneralmost 2 years ago

Very much enjoying the story. It would be fun if you can work in a way that Trevor unknowingly continues to push May toward Stacey and becoming her Lebo Fuck Doll. Making Trevor the instrument of Amy’s fall would be so awesome

TarheelTiggerTarheelTiggeralmost 2 years ago

I have been reading stories on here for years and this is the best I have read! The seduction is what sets it apart. Can't wait for the next chapters.

PS- Ignore the negative wankers :)

CharlieXMXCharlieXMXalmost 2 years ago

Amazing job! Definitely reeling this series in!

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