All Comments on 'Ten Day Cruise Ch. 04'

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tallman441tallman441about 2 months ago

Excellent story. I would love to read a story about the parents cruise. 5 stars

awkwardcoupleawkwardcoupleabout 2 months ago

Lovely end to the story, i hope you do a follow up story maybe a few years later in their lives, i do wish they would swing with their parents altho the ending you had was great

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 months ago

So in the end it was only ever about sex. No emotion, romance, love. This is just fucking and making up excuses to justify it. Convenient. I'm glad it's over. Don't use the word love again until you know what it means.

Bono2758Bono2758about 2 months ago

Please continue this series. If love to hear them get 2 suites and start to mix the parents with the kids. The combinations could be amazing. You could include mmf, mmmmf, ffm,ffffm. Just think how wild this could get.

Carp2021Carp2021about 2 months ago

A chapter 10 years later would be great

drdangerlidrdangerliabout 2 months ago

As much as I loved this series I wish parents and children had gotten involved,

Keep writing!

Luvmywife42Luvmywife42about 2 months ago

Looking forward to the wedding and honeymoon. Time fir moms a d dads to join in with the fun and i imagine everyone ening up as home nudists will encourage other friends to join the lifestyle..maybe what goes on at home between families.

MikeOrMikeyMikeOrMikeyabout 1 month ago

I really enjoyed this story. 5 Stars. Thank you for sharing.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 month ago

I was scanning this story because I read it already years ago. I thought there’s some changes and exciting addition about the parents involved with the other parents and their children. But it seems still same old thing. So I didn’t bother.to re read it.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 month ago

Great series. Thank you for not including the parents in having sex with their kids.

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