All Comments on 'Terri and Anthony Ch. 04'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Continue

Plz continue.. have Anthony come home, she has the baby, Anthony continues college... She goes to visit him and stays in a hotel, she brings sexy clothes for him like nylons and heels and they have loud, intense, bed bouncing wall slamming sex where she gets knocked up again.. but this time,have Terri realizes,slowly it's Anthony she wants or Dom suddenly dies.. but keep it going

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Keep going

How about they keep fucking even the father at home,the best time is while the father is sleeping the mother and son fucking at home like a rabbit that result to new baby.

RanDog025RanDog025about 6 years ago
THATS IT? OH DAMN

I'M LOVING THIS STORY. YOUR DOING A GREAT JOB. THANK YOU.

goducks1goducks1about 6 years ago
i gave it another 5 stars

i like the story - but you need to have Domenic either die or find out, or Anthony needs to fall in love with someone from college and let his mother down. its going on too long without moving it to the next step. so if the next chapter is just a continuation with a significant change, i think i'll be too bored to give it as many stars.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Great story plot and I don’t agree the father should die or find out. Such an instant story killer. Keep going with your great story

Such a great plot.

AnonymousAnonymous8 months ago

Still a very nice story 5 stars

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