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Click hereWhich brought my thoughts to Will, Dad, the man who rescued me from a one-way train headed straight for hell. I'd long since come to accept that I'd needed him as a dad, and Mom had needed him as a lover. He put the light back in her eyes, and that did as much for me as for her. But he still held my teenage heart in his hand.
Hope you enjoyed this take on the sexy neighbor with daughter scenario. Comments appreciated.
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texloo9 months agoI am approuching old age. I have a wonderful wife and three adult, still single, children. Smut is amusing at times, but this touched my heart and range true for me.
lexlogan8about 1 year agoAuthorThanks, zededd, very flattering. When I started writing erotica, having re-read all my old Forum and Penthouse Letters multiple times each, I thought it would be nice if I could write romance or fantasy or historical fiction, but I had zero ideas for any of those genres. This story was the result of no less than three re-writes. The thought of trying to stretch it out to novel length is way beyond me at this point, but I've only been writing since last September so we'll see what happens.
zededd2000about 1 year agoWell, I was expecting a considerable ammount more smuttery, and if I am being cruel I would say that this feels very rushed: skipping large amounts of the boring stuff that fills time and pages.
Even though I would not have the patience to read it, I feel this could be easily tripled in size and then seen in print?
I came for erotic pregnancy-based fiction but this was a stunningly heartwarming taste of talent from a talented author.
I urge you to inject that filler and publish this on Amazon. The romance genre needs a shot in the arm.
lexlogan8about 1 year agoAuthorI'll keep that in mind. I read a lot of romance, contemporary and historical. Sometimes the conflict seems contrived, formulaic. So if I can add conflict that doesn't feel like I'm checking a box, great.
mitchawaabout 1 year agoI enjoyed the two stories very much but like many of your other stories, there was no conflict. Life is never all lovie dovie, and this story would have been better if some issue or issues had raised problems for the two couples
